雅思寫作範例：15個任務2論點模板與9分文章模型

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Task Response Checklist:

• Question analysis: Identify all parts of the question that need addressing
• Position clarity: Make your stance clear (for opinion essays)
• Comprehensive coverage: Address all aspects of the prompt
• Relevance: Ensure all content directly relates to the question
• Development depth: Fully develop each idea with sufficient detail

Example from model essay:

"In conclusion, while earning money is undoubtedly a significant motivator for hard work, it is not the sole reason. Personal fulfillment, career advancement, and social responsibilities also play vital roles in driving individuals to excel in their professional endeavors."

This conclusion demonstrates excellent task response by directly addressing the extent question—acknowledging money as important but clearly stating it's not the "only reason" people work hard.

Powerful Brainstorming Methods:

1. Mind Mapping

Create a visual diagram with the main topic in the center and branch out with related ideas, examples, and supporting points.

                    ┌─────────────────┐
                    │   Work Hard     │
                    │   Motivations   │
                    └────────┬────────┘
         ┌───────────┬───────┴──────┬────────────┐
         ▼           ▼              ▼            ▼
┌─────────────┐ ┌─────────┐ ┌──────────────┐ ┌─────────┐
│   Money     │ │Personal │ │   Career     │ │ Social  │
│  Reasons    │ │Fulfil-  │ │ Advancement  │ │Factors  │
└──────┬──────┘ │ment     │ └───────┬──────┘ └────┬────┘
       │        └────┬────┘         │             │
       ▼             ▼              ▼             ▼
┌──────────┐ ┌─────────────┐ ┌─────────────┐ ┌──────────┐
│Financial │ │Satisfaction │ │Recognition  │ │Family    │
│Stability │ │& Passion    │ │& Status     │ │Influence │
└──────────┘ └─────────────┘ └─────────────┘ └──────────┘

2. The 5W1H Method

• Who: Who is affected by this issue? Who is involved?
• What: What are the main aspects/problems/solutions?
• Where: Where does this issue occur? In what contexts?
• When: When does this happen? Is it a recent trend?
• Why: Why is this issue important? Why does it occur?
• How: How does it impact people/society? How can it be addressed?

3. PROS/CONS Analysis

List advantages and disadvantages of multiple perspectives to ensure balanced coverage.

Idea Structuring Framework:

For Opinion Essays (like our model example):

Progression Logic:

• Begin with individual/personal reasons (fulfillment, satisfaction)
• Move to professional reasons (career advancement, status)
• Expand to broader social reasons (family, community impact)

This creates a natural progression from internal to external motivations, enhancing the flow and coherence of the argument.

Types of Evidence and Their Impact:

Example Development Formula:

1. Make claim (state your point)
2. Explain reasoning (why this is true)
3. Provide example (concrete instance)
4. Connect back (link to your main argument)

Paragraph Construction: The PEEL Model

P - Point: State your main idea clearly

E - Evidence: Provide supporting evidence (examples, facts)

E - Explanation: Explain how the evidence supports your point

L - Link: Connect back to the question/overall argument

PEEL Model in Action: Let's analyze the second body paragraph from the model essay:

💡 Tip

Critical Thinking Strategies:

1. Consider multiple perspectives

Even in opinion essays, acknowledge alternative viewpoints to demonstrate balanced thinking.

Example from model essay:

"While financial incentives undeniably play a significant role, I believe that there are other compelling reasons that drive individuals to put in substantial effort in their professional lives."

2. Analyze cause and effect relationships

Explore how different factors influence each other rather than simply listing points.

3. Consider implications and consequences

Discuss the broader impact of the ideas you present.

4. Apply the "So what?" test

After making a point, ask yourself "So what?" to push your analysis deeper:

• Basic point: "People work for personal fulfillment."
• So what? "This fulfillment provides psychological benefits beyond financial rewards."
• So what? "These psychological benefits lead to higher sustained productivity and innovation."
• So what? "Therefore, workplace cultures that focus only on financial incentives may actually limit long-term success."

Effective Counterargument Techniques:

The Concession-Assertion Method:

1. Acknowledge the opposing view
2. Concede valid aspects
3. Counter with your stronger argument
4. Reassert your main position

Example structure:

"While it is true that financial compensation provides crucial security and stability [ACKNOWLEDGE], and many jobs would not be performed without monetary reward [CONCEDE], research consistently shows that once basic needs are met, other factors become equally or more important for sustained motivation [COUNTER]. Therefore, viewing money as the sole driver of hard work oversimplifies complex human psychology [REASSERT]."

40-Minute Time Allocation Guide:

Critical Idea Development Mistakes:

1. Under-developed ideas

Weak: "Personal fulfillment is important for workers. It makes them happier."

Strong: "Personal fulfillment is a crucial factor that motivates hard work. Many people derive a sense of accomplishment and pride from their work. For instance, professionals such as doctors, teachers, and artists often pursue their careers out of passion and a desire to make a meaningful impact."

2. Circular reasoning

Restating your point without actually developing it further.

3. Irrelevant examples

Using examples that don't clearly connect to your main argument.

4. List-like presentation

Presenting a series of points without developing any in sufficient depth.

5. Overreliance on personal opinions

Making assertions without supporting evidence or reasoning.

Idea Development Exercise:

Topic: "Some people believe that students should be given one long vacation each year, while others believe that students should have several short vacations throughout the year. Discuss both views and give your opinion."

Instructions:

1. Identify the essay type
2. Create a mind map of potential ideas for both perspectives
3. Select your 3 strongest points (across both views)
4. For each point, draft a PEEL paragraph
5. Compare your response with our model answer (available in the resources section)

Assessment criteria:

• Have you addressed both views equally?
• Does each paragraph have a clear main idea?
• Have you supported each point with specific examples?
• Does your conclusion clearly state your own opinion?